View Full Version : first try? lolz...

08-28-2002, 01:02 PM
first try..@ poems =) or flowing, or whatever you want to call it

it was once a while ago,
that i had first met you
i don't how it happened,
how did my dreams come true?
your all i could ever want,
and even more at that
i don't know what to say,
whenever i see you
im always so speechless,
its like i can't make up my mind
it never comes out really,
cause im always holding back
i dont know why im like this,
i think its just me
too shy to say a thing..

scrutinize!! =P

*still can't get a few lines to work..i gotta fix that

oops lol didnt see..wrong section